Showing posts with label Unedited. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Unedited. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Lucky Seven ~ One More Night

I was tagged by Victoria Blisse and Natasha Blackthorne to participate in Lucky 7, in which an author excerpts seven sentences of a current work, from page seventy-seven (or seven), seven lines down on the page. And then I nominate and notify seven other authors to participate.

This is from an unedited story, entitled One More Night. See what you think.

Onto the counter? He nodded. Could he hide his reaction if his leg gave way? Drake grasped her hips. “Ready?”

Instead of bracing her hands on the counter, Jenna wrapped her arms around his neck. “I owe you a proper hello.” She stood on her toes and rubbed her nose along his. “Hi, Drake. I’ve missed you.” She captured his mouth in a kiss.

Tingles surged down his spine. Heat settled in his belly. He groaned and smoothed his hands along her sides. Without breaking the kiss, she crept closer. She opened her mouth and slid her tongue along the seam of his lips.


I'm not sure who all I'll tag, so I'll leave it open right now. Grin. Enjoy!

Thursday, May 3, 2012

Friday Flirt ~ Unedited Absolute Decision



This is a totally unedited and old snippet from a story that parallels When You're With Me. I originally titled this story Absolute Decision, since the main character is a judge. I'm not sure what I'm going to do with it, but here's a snippet. You can see how far I've come. This one is from 2008. Yeah, did I mention it was old?

Andie awoke the next morning, alone in the foreign king-sized bed. She rubbed her eyes and finger combed her hair as she looked around, not exactly sure where she was. The smell of bacon, eggs and fresh coffee toyed with her senses and made her stomach growl.

She slid out of the warm bed and padded barefoot to the kitchen without realizing or caring that she was stark naked. Ned, clad only in a pair of boxer shorts, stood at the stove.

She snuck up behind him and wrapped her arms around his midsection.

With his free hand, he stoked the length of her hip. “Hungry,” he asked, surprised and pleased to find her naked.

She nibbled on his earlobe. “Only for you,” she giggled and rested her chin on his shoulder. Her bare breasts skimmed his back and sent electric sparks to his groin. “What are you making?”

He flicked off the stove and turned to capture her in his arms. “Although I’d love to eat you all morning, I need some sort of sustenance from the dairy and meat food groups,” he laughed and reached for the plate. “Plus, I want to get to know you. What about you?”

“You’ve got me covered,” she giggled and kissed his bare shoulder. “I like whatever it is you have.”

He placed two eggs and three strips of bacon on her plate, and then got his own.

She sat and ate at his dinette table, perfectly content and buck naked.

Ned’s eyes fixated on her breasts and the silver nipple rings.

“You aren’t eating,” she said and dropped her hands. “Is something wrong?”

Slowly his eyes met hers. “Nothing’s wrong. Everything about you is so beautiful. I just can’t stop looking at your breasts. When did you get them pierced, if you don’t mind me asking,” he asked and devoured a strip of bacon.

Wringing her hands in her lap, she grinned thinly with embarrassment and squared her shoulders. “A guy told me it was hot, so I had them done to make him happy. But as you can see, it didn’t make much difference, because I’m still single and he’s not.” As the story of my life goes…

“Why not get rid of them,” he asked and shoved a fork-full of eggs into his mouth.

She shrugged and stared at the food. “They’ve grown on me. Kind of a reminder that I’ve done stupid things in my life that I don’t want to repeat,” she admitted and pushed the eggs around on her plate. “Why? Don’t you like them either? Most guys like them initially, but get tired of them after a while.”

“Doll, I like them, but if you aren’t comfortable, then take them out,” he said simply.

Thursday, April 26, 2012

Flirty Friday - Unedited Excerpt Day!



I've signed three contracts in the past month-ish and I'd like to share an unedited excerpt from one of the contracted works.

So you're probably thinking, three? Gee, she works fast. One I worked fast and tight. One I had lagging around for longer than you'd imagine. The third just sort of happened. Shrug. It either pours or it's a drought.

This is from my novella, Still the One. I'd written the side characters in Ever Fallen in Love but I wasn't sure what I'd do with them. Turns out, they told me when they wanted to talk. Fine. Still the One is a contemp, bdsm, m/f, fem-dom, spanking, toys, rollicking good time. Want that excerpt? I thought you might.

“Janine what are you doing? I wanted to do this to you, not me.” His voice dropped to a whisper. “I please you? Does that mean you think I’m sexy?”

She threaded her arms around his neck, rubbing her groin over his bound hands. “I,” she said between kisses, “am in control of what we do.” She feasted on his lips, licking his bottom lip and swiping her tongue over his teeth. The taste of mint and cola exploded on her tongue. She ground against him, pleasuring herself with his thick fingers. “And I want to do you right here, right now, sexy man.”

Eric moaned and she backed away. Confusion burned in his eyes and colour filled his cheeks. Instead of giving him the lead, she reached forward and unzipped him. Red dusted his face and the tops of his ears.

“You’re not worried someone will see us,” he asked in a hushed tone.

“I’m not.” She pushed his jeans aside enough to stroke his cock through his boxer briefs. “They can’t see behind the car and if you keep quiet, we won’t draw attention.” She worked his dick through the opening in his underwear and smeared her thumb through the precome glistening on the tip of his cock. “Right now, you’re in my hands and my control. You will do what I ask of you.”

He stared at her, but didn’t tell her to stop.

“No coming until I tell you.” She nodded to the backseat. “Lay down.”

Eric glanced behind her, then got out of the way as she opened the door. He fixed his gaze on her and sat down on the edge of the upholstered seat.

Janine gave him a gentle push and eyeballed her work. “Very nice.” She inched the hem of her skirt high enough to give him a tantalizing view of her panty-covered pussy. His mouth opened a fraction of an inch and his eyes glazed as she hooked her thumbs into the flimsy waistband of the undergarment.

“You like what you see?” She dragged the panties down to reveal the top of her pubic hair.

Eric nodded, still quiet.

“You’re doing well.” She wiggled the panties to the ground, then stepped out of them. “Now for your reward.” With her ass in the air, Janine straddled his thigh and rubbed her nose along the thick vein of his cock. “I wore these heels just for you. Do you like?”

He groaned and arched his hips. “Love it, babe.”

“Good. Are you worried we’ll get caught,” she murmured. “That’s the fun. Will we?” She kissed the base of his prick. “Or won’t we?” To punctuate her last statement, she took him deep in her mouth. She used gentle suction as she withdrew and suckled on him again. Salty semen spilt onto her tongue. “You’re on a hair trigger.”

His fists clenched tight and his knuckles whitened. “Been a while.”

Janine pulled back, leaving him slick with spit. “Hush.” She swatted his hip. “No talking or coming until I tell you.”
Should be out in September. Think you can wait that long?